Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The general populace believes that producers and people who work in big stores

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supermarket have the

duties

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duty

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of reducing the quantity of packaged

goods

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while

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other people

argues

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that buyers should avoid purchasing

goods

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that are too packaged.

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essay will explicate my opinion that consumers should avoid

over packaged

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goods

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with

few

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a few

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examples and logical conclusions.

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with, packaged

goods

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are wrapped by the producers and they have the tendency of deducting the

amount

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of

goods

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from the original quantity which is a bad thing to do

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as

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the general populace should avoid

overpackacked

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overpackaged

food because it is seen as cheating and the

goods

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can be contaminated

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and it can

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reduce the

qualityof

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quality of

the product.

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, when a

goods

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wrap is tampered with, there

are

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tendency

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the tendency

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of product leakage.

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, opened

goods

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can

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make the consumer unsecured in purchasing

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products because they feel

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can't be trusted.

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However

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the product might be cheap but has lost its uniqueness and value.

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: someone who likes a particular brand of

milk

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from a company later bought the

milk

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and found out that the seal of the

milk

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is broken,

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consumer

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a consumer

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can never purchase that

milk

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again because she will feel it's contaminated and it has lost its uniqueness in the sight of the buyer. In conclusion, when purchasing item it is important to watch out for items that

has

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have

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too much packaging as

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is a sign that it has been tampered with and can cause food poisoning.