Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It has become a trend in

modern day

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society whereby people tend to display fake show off. Many producers present their

products

in an attractive packet and they claim that the packaged

goods

is

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more significant than the

products

look

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alike

which

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are not packaged.

While

some people believe that

product

packaging plays a role in the failure or success of the

goods

, others argue that the amount of wrapping for a

product

has devastating implications

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the environment.

This

essay will analyse both views and provide an opinion.

To begin

with, packaging is prevalent these days and almost everything we buy is wrapped. Excessive wrapping has demonstrated a disastrous impact on the environment including the loss of resources like energy and water. In

this

case,

product

providers can play a role in deciding which

products

needs

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packaging and what size is appropriate as some manufacturers

tends

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to wrap every

product

in order to attract intended customers. They can consider

written

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package with relevant information about the

goods

without ambiguous presentations. Meanwhile, customers can equally contribute to the reduction of the unnecessary

wastes

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created by packaged

goods

in order to contribute to a better environment.

This

can be achieved when consumers decided to buy

least

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packaged

products

where possible

especially

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by avoiding

goods

with large wrappings if they're not a necessity.

In addition

, customers can buy bulk

goods

so that they can be wrapped in a single pack thereby reducing

wastes

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caused by the wrappings. In conclusion, the

wastes

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produced by wrapping

of

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goods

can lead to environmental pollution and harm as it is

also

a waste of resources. So we ought to reduce the amount of packaging of

products

as much as we could,

likewise

not buying wrapped

goods

because they're attractive when they're not necessarily needed.

This

means that both

provider

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and consumers have a part to play

to

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this

effect