Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the the amount of packaging of goods Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals believed that producers and shopping malls are responsible for
reduction
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the reduction
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in packaging products,
whereas
, others suggested that customer should stay away from
good
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the good
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that has too
much
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many
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coverings. I believe that companies have the right to make choices. Buying
good
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goods
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with lesser packs would reduce the cost and
in addition
, will be easy for carriage.
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essay will discuss both sides with relevant examples.
To begin
with, people pointed out that heavily packaged products
tends
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to be more expensive which is
contrast
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in contrast
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to good with little or less coverings.
For example
,it is the duty of the producers to phase out the quantity of coverings used for
good
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goods
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. Too many layers
consumes
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a lot of material thereby making the cost of the product exorbitant.
In addition
, people opined that
industry
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the industry
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should desist from purchasing over-packaged items. Over-packaging will render equipment heavy and uneasy to carry.
For instance
, a friend of mine once bought a toy from a mall
last
month. It was so huge that he had to put it on his head. The gift was for his daughter's 5th birthday.
family
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the family
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were waiting for the gift to be unwrapped just to have a glimpse of what the content could be, To their dismay, it was
finally
opened and a tiny rubber toy was laid at the centre of the gigantic cardboard cover. In conclusion,
public
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the public
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have
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the opinion that manufacturing companies should cut down the extent of packaging material for their property,
while
others prefer that
market
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the market
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should avoid buying
such
equipment. I'm of the opinion that over-packaged goods are not easy to carry and too expensive for the public to afford.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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