Durning a recent plane journet, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: 1) remind him when and where you met. 2) tell him what kind of job you are interested in. 3) say why you think you would be suitable for that job.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope
this
letter is in good health and high spirits. I am writing this
letter to you with regard to acquire
a Change the verb form
acquiring
job
in your restaurant that we discussed in
a flight. I would appreciate it if you could spare a few moments to consider my request.
Change preposition
on
Firstly
, I would like to provide some background information on the concern of job
. I am a student who has recently completed a degree in electrical engineering with excellent grades. Correct article usage
the job
Moreover
, I am without job
nowadays. The situation prompted me to reach out to you in the hopes of seeking support.
I would like to highlight some key points regarding contacting you for the purpose of Correct article usage
a job
job
. Add an article
the job
Firstly
, a few days ago we both took a flight from Karachi to Lahore. On the ,
flight you told me you have a restaurant in a very famous place in Lahore. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, you need an employee there. Secondly
, I have done electrical Engineering so, in this
context
I am interested in having Add a comma
,context
job
related to electrical maintenance Add an article
a job
Furthermore
, I have skills related to the Maintenance of electrical equipment and wiring problems in the building.
Based on the aforementioned factor, I kindly request you to hire me in your restaurant as an electrical maintenance engineer. I believe that recruiting me for this
post will be beneficial for you because there are a lot of hazards related to handling electrical equipment and wiring and a qualified professional can tackle this
easily. Additionally
, I would be grateful if you provide me handsome salary in favour of my work.
In conclusion, I sincerely appreciate your attention to this
matter and I am confident that with your support, I will opt out of the crises of being job less
and excelling in my field. Correct your spelling
jobless
Moreover
, I use my skills in a better way to help your company to work better and excel in the field of restaurants. I would be more than willing to discuss further
. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Muhammad Rizwan ShaukatSubmitted by rizwan.shaukat969 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
