The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts below give information about the
percentage
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of
water
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usage
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for three different purposes in six regions in the world.
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, almost every area have a high
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of
water
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used for agricultural purpose,
while
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North
America
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and Europe used a great deal of
water
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in terms of industrial
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.
In addition
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, domestic
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account
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for the lowest
percentage
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in six different areas.
It is clear that
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except
North
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in North
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America
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and Europe, the
percentage
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of
water
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usage
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for agricultural purpose
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for 88% to 71% in the other four areas, which is the highest type of
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.
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, industrial
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only
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for about 10% in South
America
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(10 %), Africa(7%), Central
Asia
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(5%), and South East
Asia
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(12%).
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, North
America
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and Europe
account
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for 48% and 53% respectively.
However
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, in both six different areas, domestic
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is the lowest
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of
water
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usage
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, only
account
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lower than 20%. In Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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there are 9%, 7%, and 7% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, usage, america, use, account, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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