The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts below give information about the
percentage
of
water
usage
for three different purposes in six regions in the world.
Overall
, almost every area have a high
percentage
of
water
used for agricultural purpose,
while
North
America
and Europe used a great deal of
water
in terms of industrial
use
.
In addition
, domestic
use
account
for the lowest
percentage
in six different areas.
It is clear that
except
North
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America
and Europe, the
percentage
of
water
usage
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for agricultural purpose
account
for 88% to 71% in the other four areas, which is the highest type of
usage
.
Likewise
, industrial
use
only
account
for about 10% in South
America
(10 %), Africa(7%), Central
Asia
(5%), and South East
Asia
(12%).
By contrast
, North
America
and Europe
account
for 48% and 53% respectively.
However
, in both six different areas, domestic
use
is the lowest
percentage
of
water
usage
, only
account
lower than 20%. In Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
there are 9%, 7%, and 7% respectively.
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  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
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