The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts below give information about the
percentage
of water
usage
for three different purposes in six regions in the world.
Overall
, almost every area have a high percentage
of water
used for agricultural purpose, while
North America
and Europe used a great deal of water
in terms of industrial use
. In addition
, domestic use
account
for the lowest percentage
in six different areas.
It is clear that
except North
Change preposition
in North
America
and Europe, the percentage
of water
usage
for agricultural purpose Replace the word
used
account
for 88% to 71% in the other four areas, which is the highest type of usage
. Likewise
, industrial use
only account
for about 10% in South America
(10 %), Africa(7%), Central Asia
(5%), and South East Asia
(12%). By contrast
, North America
and Europe account
for 48% and 53% respectively.
However
, in both six different areas, domestic use
is the lowest percentage
of water
usage
, only account
lower than 20%. In Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
there are 9%, 7%, and 7% respectively.Submitted by sw15923 on
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