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University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? Nowadays, many students pursue their higher studies in foreign countries. The main advantage for students studying abroad is the access to better quality education and improved job prospects.

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 brought development and luxury to Cuba. During the “Dance of the Millions”, when the price of
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 soared after the outbreak of World War I, the local “
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sugarcraft
”, not knowing what else to do with their dizzying profits, commissioned decadent Renaissance and Art Nouveau mansions that still line Havana’s more affluent suburbs. But for decades, the industry has been in decline.
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 the island regularly produced more than 7 million tonnes in the 1980s,
last
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 season — squeezed by new “maximum pressure” United States sanctions — it yielded only 480,000 tonnes.
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 year, the target is even lower as Cuba heads for its worst
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 harvest in more than a century. “Once we were the country that exported the most
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,” Dionis Perez, director of communications at Azcuba, the state agency that regulates
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 production, told Al Jazeera. But “
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 is the first year that Cuba doesn’t plan to export more
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 than it consumes”.
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