The line graph shows the changes in the population of some cities till date. Write a report and select the main features, making comparison where relevant.
The graph displays the changes in the total number of
people
living in five different cities from 1970 till date. The given cities are as follows: Tehran in Iran, Beijing in China, Lagos in Nigeria, New York
City
in USA and Moscow in Russia.
Overall
, it is clear that
the population
of Beijing, China experienced significant fluctuations over the years
. In contrast
, other given cities have had a continuous
growing populace, Change the word
continuously
although
the population
of New York
City
have remained relatively stable over time.
In 1970, Beijing had approximately 8 million
citizens residing in it and this
figure increased steadily until it hit about 11 million
people
in 1990. Afterwards, the figure decreased sharply to about 7 million
residents five years
later and from there, the numbers continued to rise progressively. Currently, Beijing has a population
of about 22 million
people
. Conversely
, the city
of Moscow had 7 million
people
in 1970 and this
value increased steadily during the past years
. Presently, this
city
has a population
of about 12 million
individuals. The same trend can be seen in the population
of Tehran, however
, in 1970, there were just about 3 million
citizens, and in five years
, the numbers increased slightly to a little less than 5 million
people
. From here, the figures continued to rise gradually and now, there are around 8 million
people
living in Tehran, Iran.
The population
of Lagos have increased remarkably over the years
from about 2 million
people
in 1972 to about 13 million
individuals in 2000. Moreover
, the population
of people
living in Lagos at the moment is at
about 17 Change preposition
apply
million
. Moving on, the city
of New York
had a total of 8 million
humans in 1970 and in 1975, the number decreased slightly to 7 million
and from there, it remained fairly stable till 1985 where
it increased a little to about 7.2 Correct word choice
when
million
which remained relatively constant till 2000, having a head count of 7.3 million
people
. Subsequently
, number
of Change the article
the number
people
living in New York
decreased very slightly to around 7.1 million
in 2010 and now, this
city
has about 7.3 million
residents.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, york, city, population, years, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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