Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change the dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: • Explain the situation • Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date • Ask for a different date to present your thesis

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Hello sir, I am writing

this

letter to you regarding making amendments to the scheduled date for my thesis on the given topic. To introduce myself, I am Jasmeen Kaur, a second-year student in an Early Childhood Education program, currently enrolled in one of your courses named Interpersonal Relationships. Despite, my presentation would be taking place 30 days from now, my elder sister is getting married on the same day. I would have tried asking her to make changes as well but

this

is a destination wedding which is taking place in her dream country Spain. The preferred venue was hardly available and she has been planning her auspicious occasion for the past 6 months.

Moreover

,If you would look into my past records, I am pretty sure you would be quite impressed by my academic performance since day one. I have submitted every single assignment on time and have never pushed the due dates any

further

. My scorecard for the past quizzes is above average and class attendance has been 100% throughout the whole semester. I would like to request you to please allow me a different time slot so that I can get a fair chance to give my best on

this

project. I promise, I will not disappoint you and would be very thankful to you for

this

act of kindness. Yours sincerely, Jasmeen Kaur.

Submitted by 12jasmeenkaur on Sun May 14 2023

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

227 words

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