The chart below shows the percentages of males and females with higher education qualifications in 5 countries in 2001.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportions of men and
women
who graduated higher
education in 5 different countries namely: Japan, Change preposition
from higher
United
States, Switzerland, Britain and Germany in 2001.
In general, Correct article usage
the United
while
the percentages of males in Switzerland and females in Germany shared the highest figure
, the opposite was true for women
in Japan.
Looking at the chart for more detail, there was only a quarter of graduated women
in Japan, which was the lowest figure
in
both genders in 5 countries and about 40% of men in Change preposition
for
this
nation finished their courses. Besides
, while
there was around 45% of men in Switzerland graduated higher
education, which was the highest Change preposition
from higher
figure
, this
figure
for women
was significantly lower by 10% to reach 35%.
Moving to Germany, females in this
country graduated higher courses at 45%. Meanwhile, these statistics for the U.S. and Britain were remarkably lower to reach
40% and a Change the verb form
reaching
third,
respectively. At
the meantime, the percentages of males in these 3 Change preposition
In
remained
countries were at the same amount of 35% in 2001.Wrong verb form
remaining
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