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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The maps illustrate the transformation of a University’s
sports
 centre at present and the upcoming plans.
Overall
, the most significant changes are likely to be the outdoor courts developed into various amenities
such
 as a leisure pool,
sports
 hall, and dance studios.
However
, the centre Area of the sport layout tends to remain in the
future
. To be specific the indoor pool
that is
 surrounded by changing rooms, gym, sitting area, and reception is planned to remain in the
future
. In the
future
 plan, there is no more outdoor courts. By facing the reception, there is going to add a
sports
 shop on the west
side
 and a café on the east
side
 of the reception. By going through both sides of the shop and café, there are plans to have a changing room in the western and Eastern corners. As for the
future
 changing room in the west
side
 corner, it is connected to the leisure pool which is going to be on the north
side
. On the other
side
, they are planning to build a
sports
 hall in front of the changing room and to dance studio on the east
side
 of the
sports
 hall.
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