You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types

between 2000 and 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the
percentage
of students who entered four different types of secondary
schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, it is evident that the
percentage
of
pupils
attending 3 types of
schools
declined over the examined period,
while
the figure for community
schools
increased.
In addition
, the
percentage
of
pupils
studying in specialist
schools
was the lowest. In 2000, the
percentage
of
pupils
attending voluntary-controlled
schools
was the highest, at 52%.
While
the figure for grammar
schools
was 24%, which was twice higher than that of specialist
schools
, with 12%. There was a decline in the percentages of these
schools
in the next five years. Specialist
schools
witnessed a fall of 1% in the proportion of
pupils
. The figures for grammar and voluntary-controlled
schools
decreased significantly to 19% and 38% in 2005, respectively.
In contrast
, starting at 10%, the
percentage
of those who studied in community
schools
increased slightly to 32% and continued to rise to 32% in 2005, and
then
reached a peak at 58% in the
last
period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, schools, pupils with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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