You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the
percentage
of students who entered four different types of secondary Use synonyms
schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is evident that the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
pupils
attending 3 types of Use synonyms
schools
declined over the examined period, Use synonyms
while
the figure for community Linking Words
schools
increased. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
pupils
studying in specialist Use synonyms
schools
was the lowest.
In 2000, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
pupils
attending voluntary-controlled Use synonyms
schools
was the highest, at 52%. Use synonyms
While
the figure for grammar Linking Words
schools
was 24%, which was twice higher than that of specialist Use synonyms
schools
, with 12%. There was a decline in the percentages of these Use synonyms
schools
in the next five years. Specialist Use synonyms
schools
witnessed a fall of 1% in the proportion of Use synonyms
pupils
. The figures for grammar and voluntary-controlled Use synonyms
schools
decreased significantly to 19% and 38% in 2005, respectively.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, starting at 10%, the Linking Words
percentage
of those who studied in community Use synonyms
schools
increased slightly to 32% and continued to rise to 32% in 2005, and Use synonyms
then
reached a peak at 58% in the Linking Words
last
period.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, schools, pupils with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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