You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the
percentage
of students who entered four different types of secondary schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, it is evident that the percentage
of pupils
attending 3 types of schools
declined over the examined period, while
the figure for community schools
increased. In addition
, the percentage
of pupils
studying in specialist schools
was the lowest.
In 2000, the percentage
of pupils
attending voluntary-controlled schools
was the highest, at 52%. While
the figure for grammar schools
was 24%, which was twice higher than that of specialist schools
, with 12%. There was a decline in the percentages of these schools
in the next five years. Specialist schools
witnessed a fall of 1% in the proportion of pupils
. The figures for grammar and voluntary-controlled schools
decreased significantly to 19% and 38% in 2005, respectively.
In contrast
, starting at 10%, the percentage
of those who studied in community schools
increased slightly to 32% and continued to rise to 32% in 2005, and then
reached a peak at 58% in the last
period.Submitted by mtgngocanh on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, schools, pupils with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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