Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Discuss the adventages and disadvantages of the two approaches.

Many

persons

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think that high school graduates should

travel

or

work

before they go to college. At a glance, the first thing to come up

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is the

time

spent to do it so, the earliest the student enters to

univesity

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university

the sooner they will finish their degree, but

besides

time

, are there good results behind taking

such

a decision?

This

essay will describe the benefits and drawbacks in regard to the aforementioned statement. There are several

advatages

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advantages

of taking some

time

off after

graduate

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from high school, the most important one

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is to have the opportunity to meet new people and new places, perhaps a whole new different culture if you have the chance to go abroad.

As a consequence

, students will have to manage

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it is like to be on their

owns

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, to find their own food and to administer their budget within

this

period of

time

, among others; going through these basic

resposibilities

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responsibilities

allow

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them to become more mature individuals and

therfore

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therefore

be more

prepare

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to face university lifestyle. Another important benefit of having

this

time

off is getting a job.

This

will teach graduates how to get

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and accomplished several

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in a daily manner and

gat

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paid in return,

as well as

comply with schedule and certain rules within the

work

environment.

This

will teach individuals to understand the

importace

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importance

of responsibility and the value of the

maney

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money

. Again,

this

will positively impact

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students’ maturity and

therefore

will help

to

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them to

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face college.

On the other hand

, the disadvantage of taking some

time

off to

travel

is the cost that has to be invested to cover

travel

expenses. Another drawback is the risk

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graduates

to get

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used to

work

and

lose

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interest in going to college. As

an

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overall

the benefits of

take

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some

time

to

work

or

travel

for graduated before they go to university are more than their drawbacks,

therefore

it seems like a good idea.

Finally

, it is very important for them to

undestand

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understand

that

this

is for a limited period of

time

, so

as a result

they need to be ready to quit

to

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work

or

travel

when the

time

comes.