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the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
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The given two charts display the ability to communicate in other
languages
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 by British
students
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 at one university in England in 2000 and 2010, The units are measured in percentage.
Overall
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, the percentage of
students
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 who were able to speak other
languages
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 came up with increasing trend in 2010.
Additionally
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, Spanish was the most commonly spoken in both years.
To begin
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 with, the ratio of
students
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 who could speak
Spanish
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the Spanish
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 language stood at 30% in 2000 and
then
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 increased by 5% in 2013.
Moreover
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, from the given data it could be clearly seen that Spanish language was the highest spoken alongside other
languages
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 for both years of study.
Additionally
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, the amount of other
and
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two other
languages
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also
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 presented
with
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increasing numbers by 5% as well, which was 20% and 15% in the year 2010. On the other
hands
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, the percentage of pupils who could speak French only was reduced from 15% in 2000 to 10% in 2010. The proportions for
students
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 who communicated in English only were
initially
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 yielded at 20% and
then
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 dropped to 10% in 2010.
Moreover
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, there was no change in the speaking German sector. The number remained constant during both years of research, which was exactly 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally, moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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