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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have seen an advertisement for a part time job welcoming visitors to your town. Write to the recruiters. In your letter •Explain why you want the job • Describe why you would be a good person for the role • Describe any relevant experience you may have

#minutes #advertisement #part #time #job #visitors #town #recruiters #•explain #person #role
Dear
sir
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/madam I have seen your advertisement
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newspaper
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the newspaper
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 that you are currently looking for someone to act as a guide to welcome
visitor
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visitors
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 to our local area, and I would like to apply for
this
 position. I am very familiar with the location because I am a resident of
this
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15
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for 15
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 years. Since I
have
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moved
to
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here, I have learned
history
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 of our area through some workshops,
online
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and online
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 newspapers and I have spent time
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researching the culture,
development
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and development
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 process here, so I believe that I can adapt
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 requirements of the position, I can give visitors many interesting and useful information.
Besdies
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Besides
 that, I used to be a scout when I was young, so I feel that I would be able to work with
group
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 of people effectively and confidently. My public speaking skill can make it easier for visitors
understand
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. I am looking forward to your
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. Mai Huong
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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