A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sam, I hope
this
letter will find you in
a
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good health. I am really happy to share my experience and give some instructions for your initial holiday campaign as you requested. since you are an adventurous character, I believe
this
journey will totally match
with
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you. Who knows you better than me, isn't ? Hiking, climbing, and
bushwalk
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may give you
real
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sense of having a camp experience away from urban life.
However
, it is mandatory to mention some negatives of these
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of holidays.
Firstly
, since you will be in an abandoned area, electricity will be hardly available, and
therefore
it would be better to complete all the work before dark comes. On top of that vulnerability of wild animals attacking is inevitable. Having a fire is a good idea outside the camp premises which may prevent the presence of wild elephants and blows. I wish I could join you if you can plan
next
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month. By the end of
this
month, I'm going to finish my semester exam, and
then
there is nothing to do
in particular
. Anyway, I wish you a happy journey and let me know your idea as well. Best Regards, John Smith.
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