A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Bukola, I hope you are doing well. I am writing as regards the camp you will like to go to during the holiday

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summer. As you already know, I enjoy camping a lot and the beautiful view of nature and I can tell you for sure you would love every bit of the

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. From my

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visit during summer, I was able to

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nature like never before.

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, the weather is always nice, with very beautiful views over the lake and garden. And you get to take nice pictures which I know you love. The best part of it is the bonfire night which you will

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close to the lake.

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, you might have some challenges with mosquitoes and the cold at night. So, I will advise you to take mosquito repellant to prevent bites from mosquitoes and a blanket and thick cloth to keep you warm. I would really like to go camping with you, but I have some engagements at work and deadlines to meet. But if you will be planning another getaway next summer, I should be able to join you. Hope you enjoy your camping

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. Lots of love. Florence.

omolefeyikemiMon May 15 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

199 words

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