A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice
Dear USAMA, I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing this
letter to you with regard to motivating and encouraging you for the new school
. I would appreciate it if could spare a few moments to consider my opinion. Firstly
, I would like to provide some background information on the problems to settle
into a new Change preposition
of settling
school
. There were a lot of new people such
as teachers, students and staff who you are not familiar with. I got to know from your mother that you get discouraged and feel down. The situation prompted me to reach out to you in the hopes of seeking advice. I would like to highlight some key points regarding the solutions to difficulties facing fitting into a new school
. Firstly
, you should go cafe and other crowded areas of the school
and try to speak with the people. Try to talk with them on different topics, so that you get familiar with them and feel less lonely. Secondly
, you should try to make interesting sports and other events happening in the school
. Play different sports and participate in different co-curricular activities like swimming, painting competitions, and speech competitions. Furthermore
, join clubs of
art, music etc at Change preposition
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school
to kill your loneliness. Considering the aforementioned factors, I kindly request you to come home in
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on
school
bus rather than coming with your parents in Correct article usage
the school
a
private. I believe that Correct article usage
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by
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with
this
move you will get
a lot of new friends. Verb problem
make
Additionally
, I would be grateful if you provide some information of
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about
school
,
so that I can visit your Remove the comma
apply
school
to help you. In conclusion, I sincerely appreciate your attention to this
matter, I am confident that with your support, you will figure out to
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how to
this
situation and will enjoy your school
life. I would be more than willing to discuss further
or provide additional information if required. Thank you for your time and consideration. Best wishes, MUHAMMAD RIZWAN SHAUKATSubmitted by rizwan.shaukat969 on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.