The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic shows a breakdown of
crime
statistics in the UK for last
year. The line graph shows the interrelation between criminal activity and age
while
the pie chart illustrates the proportion of four different crime
types.
When looking at the line graph it is immediately clear that young people
accounted for a disproportionately high level of crime
last
year and that the age
at which people
are involved in criminal activity peaks at twenty with nearly a million crimes
being committed by people
of this
age
. The number of crimes
then
plummeted before levelling off at 28. the likelihood of being involved in criminal activity continued to decline with age
.
Of the crimes
identified in the bar chart, violent crime
was the most common at nearly half of the total, and there were twice as many crimes
involving violence as there were property or drug crime
. Less serious Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
anti social
Add a hyphen
anti-social
behaviour related
Add a hyphen
behaviour-related
crime
was relatively low.
Overall
, it is clear that
young people
were much more likely to be the perpetrators of crime
and that the majority of this
crime
was violence related.Submitted by marvinda.pereira on
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