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In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.

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In modern life, one of the main problems is overpopulation. Businesses and humans are appealed
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 some governments to leave the cities and go to the countryside. In my opinion, there are more benefits
of
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 going to villages than drawbacks of it. On the one hand, if we look at the advantages, the main benefit of moving out of cities is that it is useful for citizen's health. Some factories have a range of noise, fumes and dust. It may dangerous for people. If they work
at
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 the country, there are not a lot of houses and they will not disturb anyone.
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, in most
nations
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 the businesses are located in the
rurals
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rural
.
As a result
, it will be handy for the
city
. The second positive side of
this
 is that villages have more empty
field
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fields
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. If some people in the overcrowded
city
 change their living place
to
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there, it will be balanced
to
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 the citizens.
Furthermore
, there are a lot of cars in the urban areas. It causes some traffic. When individuals go to
suburb
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, blocked roads may decrease.
Therefore
, it is true that businesses and people move out of cities.
On the other hand
, if the distance is so far from the
city
 centre, it will be
inconvenience
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 for businessmen and human beings to attend to the centre.
Moreover
,
the
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transportation takes more money. They will
also
 have to lose their time to arrive in the
city
.
Thus
, they may not agree with
this
 idea. In conclusion, the positive sides of relocating to suburban areas are more than its negative sides.
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