You have been working for a company for some time, and other rival companies are willing to employ you with a higher salary for all the practical experience you have gained. Write a letter to your company manager and in your letter • Explain the situation • Say what you would like the manager to do (increase the salary etc.) • Say what action you would take in case the manager fails to meet your demands Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr,
I am writing to say that a huge
company
invent me with a high salary
due to
my practical experience, in my view, I will send to reply later.
As you know, we are employer
in your Add an article
an employer
company
, we take a few money. If you raise our salary
, I will stay this
Change preposition
with this
company
due to
we go out to rival
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the rival
a rival
company
. Situation
mainly, rooms,kitchen having dinner is very excellent, but Correct article usage
The situation
salary
is a few.
I would like to increase the Add an article
the salary
salary
, if you do not increase, we will employ other
Correct quantifier usage
another
company
. As your employers
we are Add a comma
,employers
responsibility
, clever, ideal workers.
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responsible
However
,you would improve our salary
, understand us.
Yours sincerely,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite