The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

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The line graph demonstrates the number of commuters who use

London

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the London

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Underground Station at different

time

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times

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during

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the

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day. As can be seen from the above chart, the figure for passengers

fluctuate

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within the range of 100 to 400 people.

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, the rate of London Underground travellers

reach

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reaches

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its peak twice times a day at 7.30 am and 5.30 pm over the surveyed period. To be specific, there are 100 people using London Station at 6 am.

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this

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figure rises remarkably to a whopping 400 at 7.30 am before dropping to just under 200 passengers at 9.30 am. After that,

this

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indicator is found to be in the range of 100 to 300

commiters

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commuters

until 4 o'clock in the afternoon.

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, it peaks again at 400

passenger

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passengers

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the next two hours and ends up at approximately 150 people by 10 pm.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

143 words

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think although countries with long average working hours are economically successful, this often has some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that only talented children can become successful musicians or athletes. However, others believe that children can be taught to succeed in music or sports. Discuss both views.