The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
The supplied line chart depicts the changes in the
share
price
of Outokumpu
companies
in euros between January
two
thousand
six and December
two
thousand
ten.
Overall
, during
this
period,
price
Correct article usage
the price
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of Outokumpu
a
Add a missing verb
had a
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downward
trends
Fix the agreement mistake
trend
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, especially
downfall
Correct article usage
the downfall
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last
two
years. Now, turning to the details between
in
Change preposition
apply
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January
two
thousand
six July
two
thousand
seven
Correct determiner usage
the
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price
Change to a plural noun
prices
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of
companies
began
Fix the infinitive
to move
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move
Change the form of the verb
moving
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upward.
By contrast
, in January
two
Correct determiner usage
the
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thousand
nine
share
price
of
this
company has been minimum go down.
However
, by
two
thousand
seven to
two
thousand
eight
price
share
of Outokumpu
companies
has been oscillations. As can be seen from the graph, the amount of
share
price
of Outkumpu
companies
spent
Verb problem
apply
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decreased
in
Change preposition
by
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two
thousand
ten.
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