The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
The line chart illustrates the
revise
payment of Putokumpu companies in euros from January 2006 to December 2010.
In 2006 Change the verb form
revised
price
of Outokumpu was raised until 2008. However
, in this
period, the cost
of this
company
has fluctuations
, and after 2008 the Verb problem
fluctuated
price
of Outokumpu Wrong verb form
started
start
downsize, which led to the low Add the particle
start to
price
of the company
.
In 2006 the price
of outokumpu was cost
14 Verb problem
apply
euro
and after 2 years the payment of Fix the agreement mistake
euros
company
Correct article usage
the company
cost
31 euro
, which Fix the agreement mistake
euros
show
Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
increasing
Correct article usage
an increasing
company
.
In August 2008, the price
was felt and started cost
more Wrong verb form
costing
then
6 Replace the word
than
euro
. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
However
, in 2009 the Correct your spelling
price
prise
of Correct your spelling
price
company
rose Add an article
the company
until
16 Change preposition
to
euro
and Fix the agreement mistake
euros
felt
againCorrect your spelling
fell
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, cost, company, euro with synonyms.
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