The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
The line graph shows the changes in the
share
price
of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
There are two basic general trends: upward and downward. We can see that during 2006 and 2007 Correct article usage
the price
price
fluctuated widely, but the trend was upward.
At the beginning of Fix the agreement mistake
prices
this
period
the Add a comma
period,
share
was at EUR 13 per share
. There were gradually rose and then
climbed sharply. Although
between 2009 and 2010 Outokumpu
Change noun form
Outokumpu's
share
price
was downward than at the beginning. From mid-2008 there were
a sharp downward trend Change the verb form
was
throudh
the end of the year when it fell to the lowest point in Correct your spelling
through
this
period at just over EUR 7 per share
.
Although
from 2008 to 2009 share
price
was
fluctuated widely and at the beginning Unnecessary verb
apply
2010
Change preposition
of 2010
shows
Wrong verb form
showed
higher
period than the Correct article usage
a higher
last
month 2008
Change preposition
of 2008
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