The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
The supplied line chart depicts the changes in the
share
price
of Outokumpu companies
in euros between January two
thousand
six and December two
thousand
ten. Overall
, during this
period, price
of OutokumpuCorrect article usage
the price
a
downward Add a missing verb
had a
trends
, especially Fix the agreement mistake
trend
downfall
Correct article usage
the downfall
last
two
years. Now, turning to the details between in
January Change preposition
apply
two
thousand
six July two
thousand
seven
Correct determiner usage
the
price
of Change to a plural noun
prices
companies
began Fix the infinitive
to move
move
upward. Change the form of the verb
moving
By contrast
, in January two
Correct determiner usage
the
thousand
nine share
price
of this
company has been minimum go down. However
, by two
thousand
seven to two
thousand
eight price
share
of Outokumpu companies
has been oscillations. As can be seen from the graph, the amount of share
price
of Outkumpu companies
spent
decreased Verb problem
apply
in
Change preposition
by
two
thousand
ten.Submitted by dnm.best on
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