The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian
females
and Use synonyms
males
in different Use synonyms
age
groups who did Use synonyms
the
regular physical activity in 2010. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it is apparent that Linking Words
females
did more regular exercises than Use synonyms
males
in almost every Use synonyms
age
in 2010, except for the Use synonyms
age
between 15 to 20, the male outnumbering the female.
To be specific, starting from Use synonyms
age
15 to 24, the figure for Use synonyms
males
reached 52.8%, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
females
were about 5% lower than Use synonyms
males
. As the Use synonyms
age
grew older, the percentage of the female group gradually increase to roughly half of the Use synonyms
females
who went exercise regularly at the Use synonyms
age
of 45 to 54. Use synonyms
However
, the male figure experienced a significant drop and reached a notable low at 39.5% in the Linking Words
age
35 to 44, and Use synonyms
then
slightly rose to 43.1%, which was approximately 10% lower than the female.
After 54 years old, the female got less active in regular physical activity, and the number decreased to 47.1% at the Linking Words
age
of 65 and over. In terms of the male, the figure grew slightly by 46.7% Use synonyms
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
However
, it was still 1% lower than the female.Linking Words
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