The bar chart below shows the information of the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did frequent physical activity in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of Australian males
and females
in different age
groups
that did frequent exercise
in 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that females
had the highest percentage
of engaging in physical activity whereas
males
had a low percentage
.
To begin
, age
groups
between 15 and 24 had the highest number of males
that exercise
compared to others and the female with a percentage
of 47 7%. However
, age
groups
from 25 to 34 had a percentage
of 48.9% of females
which is more than the male
of 42.2 % that Fix the agreement mistake
males
exercise
. Also
, age
groups
of 35 to 44 had a high
number of 52.5% Correct word choice
higher
females
than the male
with the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
males
percentage
of exercising.
Furthermore
, between the age
groups
of 45 to 54 females
had a significant percentage
of 53. 3% which shows that females
exercise
the most than males
in this
age
group. Although
, age
groups
of 55 to 64 and the age
of 65 and above had more females
that exercise
than males
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