The bar chart below shows the information of the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did frequent physical activity in 2010

The bar chart illustrates the

percentage

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of Australian

males

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and

females

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in different

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groups

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that did frequent

exercise

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in 2010.

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, it can be seen that

females

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had the highest

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of engaging in physical activity

whereas

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males

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had a low

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.

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,

age

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groups

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between 15 and 24 had the highest number of

males

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that

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compared to others and the female with a

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of 47 7%.

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,

age

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groups

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from 25 to 34 had a

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of 48.9% of

females

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which is more than the

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of 42.2 % that

exercise

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.

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,

age

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groups

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of 35 to 44 had a

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number of 52.5%

females

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than the

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males

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with the lowest

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of exercising.

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, between the

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groups

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of 45 to 54

females

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had a significant

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of 53. 3% which shows that

females

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exercise

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the most than

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in

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age

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group.

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,

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groups

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of 55 to 64 and the

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of 65 and above had more

females

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that

exercise

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than

males

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.