The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates how town Stokeford has improvement has been done between the years 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, in the earlier ,years there are lots of space for farming land but it has been removed and this
place is used for homes.
First of all, in the year 1930 Stokeford village has countless spaces for farming and farm animals. But this
space has been cut down and utilised at homes and apartments for the people. Also
, lots of houses are added in the year 2010. Because of the new, infrastructure
the shops near the post office have been demolished.
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,infrastructure
On the other hand
, the major change is the gardens are the teardown and this
place is used as retirement houses for individuals for those who retired. ,Also
the primary school has been altered in 2010 and two new buildings are added to each side. The river Stoke are as is flowing alongside the town and the bridge are in the top north corner as it is this
place has not changed in these years.Submitted by swapnilingale1155 on
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