the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.

the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The graph displays the survey on UK charity donations between 1990 and 2010.
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writing will give a summary and comparison of the data based on their percentages in various age ranges.
Overall
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, the year 1990 recorded a significant contribution from British fellows followed by their elderly people and the lowest performance from those in their 18-25.
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, in 2010, the trend was slightly changed where elderly people donated more than others and yet young adults still contributed very little. To start with, the percentages hit the highest in the category of middle ages, recording a peak of 40%, which makes them the top donators from 1990.
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, in that year, it was
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recorded higher charitable acts from 18-50 years old and lesser pitched-in from the elderly compared to 2010.
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,
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trend changed in the 21st century, where almost 40% and 35% of seniors (aged 51-65 and 65 respectively) saved some savings for the unfortunate than they used to. Young ones,
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, dropped drastically as low as 0.05 points in their charitable activity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable giving
  • demographic analysis
  • economic factors
  • social awareness
  • technological advancements
  • societal values
  • donation patterns
  • functioning and effectiveness
  • speculate
  • future trends
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