n some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions?

In my perspective,
Communication
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the Communication
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gap between
teenage
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teenagers
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and
adult
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adults
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came from word
developing
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, technology changing,
generation
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and generation
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thinking.It might become news, situations, and movies.Some teenagers
are not understand
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what the slang word, which is viral before they
born
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, is.
On the other hand
, A few
adult
is
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confuse
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with teenager’s slang.
Nowaday
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,
people
normally communicate via.social media platforms
such
as Instagram, Snapchat, and Facebook.Majorities of
user
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users
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who use those platforms are
teenager
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teenagers
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due to
some
limitation
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limitations
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such
as a few platforms are required
new
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a new
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system version which some
adult
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adults
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think
that
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isn’t
good
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idea to buy a new phone or computer because their phone or computer can not update
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the new
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version but it is still working.
Moreover
, Teenager’s
conversation
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conversations
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usually talk about their love life,
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and hangout
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hangout
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hang out
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planning for tonight.
However
,
Adult
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often
thinking
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about their children, dinner
planing
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,
fix
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a car.
Those reason
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will lead
people
feel
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disconnect
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with
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the conversation of gap
different
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.Next time,
Trying
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to explain or use the normal word when talking with older
people
.Teaching them about new or viral
platform
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platforms
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.Opening your mind when they talk about
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an idea
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even
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or even
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topic
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a topic
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will make you feel bored.It will
be help
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to
deduce
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reduce
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the gap between younger and older
people
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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