Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the past decade, technology and the internet changed our life so much.

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lefe

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life

become much easier the world's

population

jumped rapidly.Society's people are divided into groups and are

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concerned

that as the number of citizens

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that will lead to global crisis

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that notion other are rejecting it. Supporting

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school of thought, People believe due

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gigantic

growth

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the population

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will lead to

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resouces

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resources

.

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decade, nearly all

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individuals

can find jobs

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easily

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the

increase

in

population

results in

growth

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completion

competition

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candidates

.Another supporting

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argument

, nowadays countries are facing pollution and climate change as one

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threats

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the large demand for production and more and more consummation of foods.

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of people believe that

this

increase

will lead to

growth

in the economy and

postive competitetion

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positive competition

among different sectors.

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, nowadays the number of

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chain

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increasing

due to

larger demand ,so creating

bigger

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number of

opportnities

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opportunities

for fresher

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graduates

.

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, in crisis,

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and enterprises rose with their

innovation

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ideas for ways to solve problems,

also

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increase

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an increase

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in

population

will lead to

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of

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point

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of

views

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. In conclusion,

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believe that

growth

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the growth

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of

population

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the population

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will aid the community and economy in many

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fruitful

ways and

this

rapid

increase

advantages

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outraced their

disdvantages

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disadvantages

.

Therefore

, we will have

society

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a society

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with

powerful

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economy and

smart

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sunistaniable

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sustainable

environment.