The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
The graph demonstrates the rank of worklessness in the US and
Japan
from March
1993 to March
1999.
Overall
, in 1993 the US index of unemployment was three times higher than Japan
's. But now, the score is almost the same.
In 1999, the result shows apply 7% in the USA
and 2.5% in Japan
. In the next two years, number of the jobless in Japan
got increased, while
in the USA
it was decreasing. In March
1996, the rate of Japan
prevailed to 4.5%, while
the USA
got about 5%. Between 1996 and 1997 Japan
endured reducing, but again they gained more unemployed people than one year ago, USA
still was losing from workless inhabitants.
March
1998, indicators of the two countries illustrate almost the same numbers. Last
1999 year, the Japanese overtook Americans by a percentage of joblessness. Index describes that Japan
had 0.0001% more than the USA
had in 1999. The final percentage was about 5.5%Submitted by muharodnoy on
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