The pie charts below show the number of hours spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates, and t11e total student population.
The three pie charts below provide data on the amount of
time
spent in a library
by students
of a British university
.
It can be clearly observed that those who study in
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undergraduate
level spent less Correct article usage
the undergraduate
time
in a library
than either postgraduate or all other students
of university
.
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the university
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the chart
the majority of undergraduate Add a comma
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students
had the
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time
in a book room, by contrast
with the postgraduate students
. The figure
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were
63 per cent and 17 per cent appropriately. Just over a half proportion of senior Change the verb form
was
students
spent more than fifteen hours
in the library
, while
only a tiny fraction of biginner
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bigger
students
had the same hours
. And almost the same percentage of undergraduate, postgraduate
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and postgraduate
students
(28% and 32%) spent time
in their university
's library
between eight and 14 hours
.
It is interesting to know that exactly a
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students
had at most only 7 hours
in a book room of British
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university
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