The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows the causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the staple reasons why lands for
agriculture
Replace the word
agricultural
purpose
becoming less productive. The table shows how these Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
causes
affected three regions, namely North America, Europe, and Oceania during the 1999s,
Overall
, there are three main causes
of worldwide land
degradation, over-grazing, deforestation, over-cultivation
. Correct word choice
and over-cultivation
Moreover
, this
causes
has the most effect on Europe and Fix the agreement mistake
cause
least
effect on North America.
As the pie chart shows, there are four reasons for Correct article usage
the least
land
degradation that over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation
had almost same
percentage for causing lands Correct article usage
the same
becoming
less productive, 35%, 30% and 28% respectively. Other reasons just had under Change the verb form
to become
one-tenth
ratio.
Those Correct article usage
a one-tenth
causes
had the most impact on Europe with 23%. Oceania were
affected with 13% that 11.3% of that number was caused by over-grazing, Change the verb form
was
however
, over-cultivation
didn't have any impact on land
degradation. For the last
region, North America, just 5% of their land
degraded
. Add a missing verb
was degraded
Although
deforestation had the least percentage, over-cultivation
had the most.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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