The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows the causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows the causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the staple reasons why lands for
agriculture
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agricultural
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purpose
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purposes
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becoming less productive. The table shows how these
causes
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affected three regions, namely North America, Europe, and Oceania during the 1999s,
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, there are three main
causes
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of worldwide
land
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degradation, over-grazing, deforestation,
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over-cultivation
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and over-cultivation
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.
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,
this
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causes
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cause
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has the most effect on Europe and
least
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the least
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effect on North America. As the pie chart shows, there are four reasons for
land
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degradation that over-grazing, deforestation and
over-cultivation
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had almost
same
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the same
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percentage for causing lands
becoming
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to become
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less productive, 35%, 30% and 28% respectively. Other reasons just had under
one-tenth
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a one-tenth
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ratio. Those
causes
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had the most impact on Europe with 23%. Oceania
were
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affected with 13% that 11.3% of that number was caused by over-grazing,
however
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,
over-cultivation
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didn't have any impact on
land
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degradation. For the
last
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region, North America, just 5% of their
land
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degraded
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was degraded
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.
Although
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deforestation had the least percentage,
over-cultivation
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had the most.
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