Your office building doesn't have parking available.  Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem  Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear Mrs Julia, I am writing to you with regard to the lack of parking in our office. My name is David Beckham, and I have been working as an accountant for 3 years. The fact is that we have a problem
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the lack of parking. We search for parking for over twenty minutes every day.
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, the nearest parking is three kilometres away.
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situation, we start the day stressed.
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is affecting our business negatively.
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, we are subject to arguments and sometimes even fights.
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, the sense of solidarity among workers decreases. In my opinion, we can solve
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problem by turning the unused part of our workplace next door into a parking lot. In conclusion, I believe that if
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problem is resolved, we, the employees, will start the day stress-free and be more productive and beneficial to our company. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, David B
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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