The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The two pictures compare the current industrial area of a city with a plan to develop the same

site

. We can see that the

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developed proposal involves making a number of changes to the

site

; mainly in the central area. There are no plans to rebuild the

factories

in the proposed plan.The most noticeable change from the existing to the proposed

site

plan is that there will no longer be

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factories

when the construction has been done.

This

will be achieved by replacing the

factories

with more accommodation sites.

Additionally

, the proposed square road will become wider by adding some small roads, facilitating

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access to

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specific areas.To remove the current

factories

, a new school will be constructed

at the end

of the square. Some other facilities including

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center

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, playground

site

and shopping malls will

also

be added around the square.

Finally

, the planned

developing

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work will

also

include a special road over the river to reach the housing areas and farmland.