Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It has been argued that

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that were born into

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with a lack of finances are better equipped in their adult life when faced with a dilemma as opposed to

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that were brought up in a family with no financial burden.

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, on one side, it is apparent that

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from

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with financial struggles have been exposed to various

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during their upbringing which has prepared them to be better prepared with

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in the future.

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,

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from wealthy

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have not had to face

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, making them ill-prepared to deal with

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as adults. Personally, I firmly agree with the former argument.

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with, the value of money is substantial toward survival in the modern day and lack of

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perpetuates obstacles that need to be overcome,

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, individuals that grow up in

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environment are highly equipped to face future

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.

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, a

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may have to attend a public school

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of a private school,

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to not having the latest clothes or shoes like the other kids at school.

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of

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, they may be bullied or teased because they are not like everyone else.

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causes many adversities that the

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must learn to overcome as they gradually become an adult. I strongly agree with

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notion as finding solutions to varying

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when growing up will greatly benefit you in adulthood.

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,

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that never had to worry about the cost of anything did not experience the same

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as that mentioned above.

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, parents can pay for higher education, the latest clothing,

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newest devices, and ultimately give their

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a stable childhood as the

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would not have to witness their parents bickering about money.

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, these

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will have an easier upbringing, at least when it comes down to finances.

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,

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does not mean that

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from these types of

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do not have

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, I just believe that they are exposed to less of them and are not as equipped to find solutions later in their lives.

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, being brought up in a family with low funds can cause many

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within differing aspects of their life, ultimately causing them to grow up faster and to think more abstractly than that

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growing up in

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with large amounts of money.