Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about teenagers facing the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education

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there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school I would argue that it is better to go to college or university . The option to start work straight out of school is attractive for several reasons they are to become independent and learn skills and start earning money and get the position, and settle down earlier And

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hand, I believe that it's more beneficial

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your students to continue their studies because there are getting better jobs, opportunities and higher salaries and

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knowledge some jobs require academic qualifications and

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useful members of society. For the reason mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their lives, and if there continue their studies beyond the school level.