You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates the consumption of people in the UK on food and drink, restaurant and hotel,
as well as
entertainment for various ages in the UK in 2004.
Overall
, it can be seen from the bar chart that the amount of public interest in food and drink went up gradually as the increases of ages,
while
the other categories have a fluctuation trend among all life groups. Commencing, the young crowd who have age under 30
years
old that spend their money on meals and beverages was at nearly 5%. It was a gradual increase in every age group and reached a plateau of around 23% for people 76
years
old and above.
Similarly
, citizens that expenditure their money in terms of entertainment rose significantly and reached a peak in the ages group 71-75
years
old at 23% before dropping to just below 15% in the community 76
years
old and above.
On the other hand
, the total spending on restaurants and hotels has the highest value in people under 30
years
old accounting for 14%.
Subsequently
, it went down slightly in citizens in age 31-45
years
old and remained the same in value with the crowd around 46-60
years
old at just above 10%.
Moreover
, it was plummet in society aged 61-75
years
old at just below 5% before going up in community 76
years
old and above around 6%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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