The graph below shows the population figures for India and China since the year 2000 predicted population growth up until 2050
The provided line graph delineates information regarding the
population
numbers for India
and China
since 2000 and predicted population
growth up until 2050.
It concludes from the given information that, India
stood at 1,000 billion
for population
figures while
China
had 1,200 billion
in population
.
Getting back to the details, in 2000 China
saw the highest point whereas
India
stood at the lowest point. So China
's population
increased from 1000 to 1,300 billion
in
2000 and 2020. And Change preposition
between
India
's population
raised 1,400 billion
. But it is anticipated that China
's people will fall from 1,460 to 1400 billion
from 2030 to 2050. While
India
is predicted to increase from 1,400 to 1,600 billion
population
.
Overall
, China
stands at the highest point whereas
the population
is expected to fall in future.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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