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The graph below shows the population figures for India and China since the year 2000 predicted population growth up until 2050

The graph below shows the population figures for India and China since the year 2000 predicted population growth up until 2050
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The provided line graph delineates information regarding the
population
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 numbers for
India
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 and
China
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 since 2000 and predicted
population
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 growth up until 2050. It concludes from the given information that,
India
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 stood at 1,000
billion
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 for
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 figures
while
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China
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 had 1,200
billion
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 in
population
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. Getting back to the details, in 2000
China
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 saw the highest point
whereas
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India
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 stood at the lowest point. So
China
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's
population
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 increased from 1000 to 1,300
billion
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in
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between
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 2000 and 2020. And
India
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's
population
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 raised 1,400
billion
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. But it is anticipated that
China
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's people will fall from 1,460 to 1400
billion
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 from 2030 to 2050.
While
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India
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 is predicted to increase from 1,400 to 1,600
billion
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population
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.
Overall
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,
China
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 stands at the highest point
whereas
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 the
population
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 is expected to fall in future.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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