You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating or cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter -Give details of what was wrong -Explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at that time -Say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to express dissatisfaction with my stay in your hotel on 19th May 2023 in

room

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no. 214. The air-conditioning system of the

room

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was operational but was highly ineffective. Even after setting the temperature to 62 degrees Celsius, it could just cool to 74 degrees Celsius

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the outside temperature was hovering around 76 degrees Celsius.

Moreover

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, after checking with the receptionist, I wasn’t offered another

room

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to address my concern

along with

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poor

room

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service. To overcome the situation, I was forced to sleep with windows kept open in

such

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warm weather. To add to my discomfort, I started getting

cigarette-smoking

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a cigarette-smoking

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smell,

along with

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a marijuana smell from downstairs, making me unable to sleep till 1 AM. I had insufficient sleep, amounting to 6 hours, as the next day I was to drive for 10 hours continually. I would like to have a full refund for my stay at your hotel as it was the worst service I ever experienced in my lifetime.

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, I would urge you to change the air filters and wash the carpet in the

room

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. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Harsh

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coherence cohesion

Check the logical flow of the letter to ensure a clear and coherent structure.

coherence cohesion

Use an appropriate and formal greeting and closing in the letter.

task achievement

Focus on specific details and provide a more explicit explanation of the issue with the air-conditioning system.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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