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People today change their jobs and even begin new careers more than ever before. This can cause difficulties for companies, as well as the individuals concerned. What challenges do they both encounter? What strategies are there to meet these challenges?

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Older generations have changed their workplace just 2 or 3 times in their lifetime.
Although
work
 was a big part of citizens' lives, they did not pay much attention to the
work
 environment and tend to stay even if they are not paid enough for their
work
, are being bullied or
not
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 even recognized by colleges or heads of the company. Today
people
 are beginning to see that they will be working for
a
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 vast majority of their life,
therefore
 they are seeking
the
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 job with
good
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, friendly team, good pay and a place where they can be heard. Because of
this
,
people
 started to change jobs more frequently, which became a problem for companies
as well as
 future employees. In
this
 essay, I will reveal the issues encountered by both sides and provide some solutions to
this
.
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,
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individuals who are looking for a new job after quitting after several months will have trouble finding a new one because of
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 of
work
 experience and stability. For a workplace
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 person
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 worked in a couple of companies for a few months seems like a bad investment, because of
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 that they will stay in a designated position for a longer period of
time
.
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 a few months in one place seems like that the employee has only just familiarized with a task she or he was given.
Secondly
, employers have to face the challenge of constantly looking for
people
 without having a reliable
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 team.
This
 not only takes a lot of
time
 to find the right employee
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 but
also
 takes a lot of
time
 to train them. The invested
time
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 can not be redeemed. The solution for
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companies who are having problems with keeping
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the
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workers could be to search for the cause
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the
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inside
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their workplace.
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 of the
time
people
 leave
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because of bad management,
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 a very helpful, friendly or cooperative team they have to
work
 with. By fixing problems from the inside, future employees will be more willing to stay and be more pleased working for the company longer.
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