you work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,

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is Mahsa Hassaniousha with customer number L23517. I'm writing

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to inform

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a malfunction in the set of headphones I purchased yesterday to use for my online classes. It sounds like there is a problem with the microphone since my students kept complaining about my voice breaking up. I tried my old headphone and it turned out to work properly so it's definitely the new one. I'm an online English teacher and I conduct 15 classes on a daily basis,

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, having a functional set of equipment is a must for us to provide a quality class and avoid any distractions

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this

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. I will lose my students if I can meet these requirements. I want to ask you to kindly consider it an emergency and let me know how soon it can be replaced with a new one and

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if I need to fill in any forms. Can't wait to

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from you Mahsa

Submitted by mahsa_hasanikousha on Thu May 18 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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