you work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

#work #home #piece #equipment #job #shop #company

Dear Sir or Madam,

This

is Mahsa Hassaniousha with customer number L23517. I'm writing

this

to inform

youof

Correct your spelling

you of

a malfunction in the set of headphones I purchased yesterday to use for my online classes. It sounds like there is a problem with the microphone since my students kept complaining about my voice breaking up. I tried my old headphone and it turned out to work properly so it's definitely the new one. I'm an online English teacher and I conduct 15 classes on a daily basis,

therefore

, having a functional set of equipment is a must for us to provide a quality class and avoid any distractions

such

this

. I will lose my students if I can meet these requirements. I want to ask you to kindly consider it an emergency and let me know how soon it can be replaced with a new one and

also

if I need to fill in any forms. Can't wait to

hearing

Change the verb form

hear

show examples

from you Mahsa

Submitted by mahsa_hasanikousha on Thu May 18 2023

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The Closing

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Yours faithfully,

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Yours sincerely,

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Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

163 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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