The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides the
percentage
of how many both male and female home workers chose their lifestyle from the primary three reasons in 2019.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that
although
the most popular reason, namely, for saving money, constituted large distributions in both genders' proportions, the other two either for productivity or upbringing for children accounted for each
percentage
at different rates.
To begin
with the
percentage
for those who worked at home to save costs, men and women indicated roughly identical ratios at 45% and 42% in that order. These amounts were not quite twice as much as their each second common reason. In terms of their second reason of request for working from home,
whereas
a quarter of the males quested for productive working life, almost the same
percentage
of the females requires
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style to bring up their offspring
along with
their work.
However
, there were 11% of women
who
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wanted to work in their houses to enhance their productivity
while
4% of the men tried to contribute to taking care of their children.
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