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The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam
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These two maps of the town give information on changes from 1990 to 2010. There can be seen many changes in a township. Before construction, in 1990, there was a river in the centre of town and from the west, there was a forest, an ancient structure with some plants and animals. On the right side of the effluent, there were farmlands and small villages. From the map of 1990, we could know an eco-friendly and ancient environment. After construction, in 2010, in the north of the map, a lake and some mountains were made and on the east side, a hotel was built. On the bottom of the map, there was a still stream but, on the west and the east of the steam, there was some new electricity and on the north side of the river, there was a hydroelectric dam.
Overall
Linking Words
, through the decade, the urban centre changed more modern than before.
Also
Linking Words
, town construction got rid of ancient buildings and some nature and life.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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