The diagrams depict the scheme of development for Youngsvillie’s town in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005.

The diagrams depict the scheme of development for Youngsvillie’s town in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005.
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The diagrams depict the scheme of development for Youngsvillie’s town in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005.
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, the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to infrastructure, its extensive railway station, and its
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, some house was removed and infrastructure remained in the same position over the given period. In 2005, nearly half of the
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and houses were located northwest of Youngsville which was separated by River Alamad,
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was replaced by parking places, and accommodations
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were demolished to make way for a new railroad that went through the whole town to connect from the South to the North after 25 years. There was an appearance of a huge stadium next to the new railroad and the hospital was still unchanged. A noticeable change that happened on the opposite side of the river was all of the
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and houses were demolished and replaced for industrialization from 2005 to 1980. In the
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side, a pagoda was converted into a large warehouse, which was surrounded by a circle of factories. The other warehouse was built on the top of two skyscrapers, both of them were erected alongside the original railroad with the purpose

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