The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.

The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in Japan and Malaysia in five categories.
The pie charts give information about the average household consumption in
Japan
and
Malaysia
in five categories.
Overall
, it is obvious that both countries spent
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most of their income on housing, food and other goods and services.
While
the figures for healthcare and transport were spent in a lower proportion. In
Malaysia
, the consumption of housing was 34%, which hit the highest point of total expenditure. The figure for
Japan
spent the lower percentage at about 21%. Japanese citizens paid the highest proportion on a range of other goods and services, at 29%, which was slightly more than in
Malaysia
. In terms of food,
Malaysia
spent slightly higher compared to
Japan
. The two lowest figures in
Japan
were two times higher than in
Malaysia
. In
Japan
,
this
accounted for 6% of the total,
while
20% of household spending went on transport.
Malaysia
allocates money for modes of transport and health care at 10% and 3% respectively.
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