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Nowadays some youngest know about international pop and movie actors but realize very not so much about popular humans from the archive in their own country. Why is this ? How can more interest be produce in young people so gain more knowledge about their own famous people from history?

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It is indisputable that today we are flooded with information about everything. The youth of today know about global celebs but are increasingly
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 about their own historical personalities.
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 propose some measures to generate their interest in historical events and people. The first and greatest reason for
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 countries is
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 they only focus on passing their exams quite than
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gaining
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 the youth today is more fascinated towards the
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celebrities
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families
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parents are working and because of
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 children's education about their roots and history has taken a back seat. To
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 there are several innovative and creative methods that can be used to make the youth more interested and aware
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notable people from history .
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 has a big role to play in spreading their awareness .
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