A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
#company #area #amount #money #sponsor #children’s #sports #team #two #years #concerts #feedback #summarise #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
After
greeting
, I am Add an article
the greeting
a greeting
writitng
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writing
this
letter to you with regard to the last
survey had been made to get feedback for
the general public about the topic of spending a certain amount of money either to support our local children's Change preposition
from
sport
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sports
team
or to organize two open-air concerts. Firstly
, I would like to thank you for your efforts in our neighborhood
and I will describe my point of view in Change the spelling
neighbourhood
this
missive.
To begin
with, sponsoring the local children’s sports team
, would be the right choice. However
, local people did great efforts to suppot
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support
this
, it
still needs too much money to reach the high levels Correct word choice
but it
standards
which will encourage children to join Change preposition
of standards
this
team
and practice more and more instead
of wasting their time watching TV or playing video games. Therefore
, they need good sports facilities, new bathrooms, and expanding the garden area.
On the other hand
, paying for the concerts will be a great idea as well, it would raise the sense of community between people that we belong to this
place. Moreover
, it will be a chance to meet others in open
healthy area and Correct article usage
an open
enjoying
music. Wrong verb form
enjoy
Hence
, I would suggest to pay
more attention to both local Change the verb form
paying
sport
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sports
team
and local concerts.
Thanks a lot for your caring.
Yours faithfully,
Adam WhiteSubmitted by abdoo.magicoo on
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