A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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letter to you with regard to the

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survey had been made to get feedback

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the general public about the topic of spending a certain amount of money either to support our local children's

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or to organize two open-air concerts.

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, I would like to thank you for your efforts in our

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and I will describe my point of view in

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with, sponsoring the local children’s sports

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, would be the right choice.

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, local people did great efforts to

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still needs too much money to reach the high levels

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which will encourage children to join

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and practice more and more

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of wasting their time watching TV or playing video games.

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, they need good sports facilities, new bathrooms, and expanding the garden area.

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, paying for the concerts will be a great idea as well, it would raise the sense of community between people that we belong to

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, it will be a chance to meet others in

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healthy area and

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music.

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, I would suggest

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more attention to both local

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and local concerts. Thanks a lot for your caring. Yours faithfully, Adam White