A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, After
greeting
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, I am
writitng
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writing
this
letter to you with regard to the
last
survey had been made to get feedback
for
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the general public about the topic of spending a certain amount of money either to support our local children's
sport
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sports
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team
or to organize two open-air concerts.
Firstly
, I would like to thank you for your efforts in our
neighborhood
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and I will describe my point of view in
this
missive.
To begin
with, sponsoring the local children’s sports
team
, would be the right choice.
However
, local people did great efforts to
suppot
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support
this
,
it
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but it
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still needs too much money to reach the high levels
standards
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of standards
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which will encourage children to join
this
team
and practice more and more
instead
of wasting their time watching TV or playing video games.
Therefore
, they need good sports facilities, new bathrooms, and expanding the garden area.
On the other hand
, paying for the concerts will be a great idea as well, it would raise the sense of community between people that we belong to
this
place.
Moreover
, it will be a chance to meet others in
open
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healthy area and
enjoying
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music.
Hence
, I would suggest
to pay
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more attention to both local
sport
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team
and local concerts. Thanks a lot for your caring. Yours faithfully, Adam White
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