The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of time Australian parents spent helping their children during the 2013 year. At first glance ,it is evident that

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mothers

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expend more time

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playing games than

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men spent less time

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dressing

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than women.

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with dressing ,

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mothers

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and

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helped their children approximately four-fifths percentage,

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spent only half per cent .

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men had below the norm index. In

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the indicators remain unchanged , but the amount of

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help grew to the average index,

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the

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help slightly go down. A similar pattern can saw in

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percentages. The most alter had playing games part . The amount of

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mothers

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sharply increased to seven in ten per cent,

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females rapidly decreased to below the 30 index.

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men

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slightly dropped .

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last

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Preparing for bed

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parents help go

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the mothers

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mothers

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opposite go down,

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fathers

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the fathers

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remain stable .