The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs
shows
temperature and the bar chart revenue from bathing suit sales in new york city during the Change the verb form
show
firsts
months of the year 2012. Looking from an Change the noun form
first
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that April is when more money is made from selling swimsuits and the more people buy swimsuits in winter and spring.
As illustrate
in the line graphs the temperature increases over the Change the form of the verb
illustrated
last
five of six months with the peak in june
, the temperature until 65 degrees. Change the capitalization
June
As
contrast, the bar chart demonstrated that the revenue Change preposition
In
tend
to Change the verb form
tends
decreases
during the peak of the summer. Wrong verb form
decrease
Moreover
, ,
we can see that the Change the punctuation
apply
selling
of swimsuits Replace the word
sales
grow
up in the winter and spring, Change the verb form
grows
the
numbers started to rise in Correct word choice
and the
february
. From February to March the amount went Change the capitalization
February
of
150 to approximately 200 Change preposition
from
dolares
and in Correct your spelling
dollars
the
April reach Correct article usage
apply
the
peak of 250.
Correct article usage
a
Nevertheless
, is possible see
that the numbers of Fix the infinitive
to see
purchase
drastically fall in Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
the
Correct article usage
apply
june
.Change the capitalization
June
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