Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

The
population
of
car
owners has increased speedily within thirty years and
this
has been a steady cause of
traffic
jams
over
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many cities of the
world
.
This
is an occurrence happening all around us and can be amended if the government mandates the introduction of public transport into our cities and an increase
of
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taxes paid on private
cars
. Generally, getting to a destination has now become a heavy task because of the longer period it would take, as
every one
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is driving,
therefore
causing
traffic
jams and increased time
is
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being taken to reach a destination.
For instance
, I had an urgent meeting scheduled for 7am
last
week Thursday and could not meet up despite leaving home at 5am for a journey that would have taken just thirty minutes.
However
, all of these can be solved with the introduction of
public
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transport system in cities all around the
world
by the government, if they mandate the
population
to use public transport rather than their private
cars
,
this
will limit the number of private
cars
owned by individuals as they would become of no use and
consequently
reduce the volume of
cars
on the road making movement easier. It has become easy for many people to buy
cars
because the
tax
paid on
it
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is quite negligible.
Therefore
, they can put a high charge per earning as a
tax
on every
car
owned by an individual.
For example
in Turkey, every
car
owner must pay one thousand dollars every three months as a
tax
on their
cars
, with
this
the amounts of
cars
used reduced from 50% to 35% of the
population
within a year.
This
is a very effective means of discouraging the
population
and
also
a solution to the constant
traffic
jam experienced all over the
world
. In conclusion,
traffic
jam has become a serious issue all over the
world
and the government can discourage the people by mandating public means of transportation and a
tax
charge on every private
car
.
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