The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
people
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that ate fast
food
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in restaurants in three different
years
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, namely 2003, 2006, and 2013 in the USA.
Overall
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, most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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people
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ate fast
food
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at least once a
week
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or once or twice a month.
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, a small percentage of
people
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who
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apply
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never ate fast
food
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or ate it every day. These facts were true for all
years
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2003, 2006, and 2013. As we can see, about 60% of
people
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ate fast
food
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once a
week
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or once or twice a month in all three
years
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. In 2006, 33% of
people
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ate it once a
week
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,
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this
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number in 2013 was under 30%. For individuals who ate fast
food
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once or twice a
month
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we had the reverse pattern which means that more than one-third of
people
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ate fast
food
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in 2013,
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just 25% of
people
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ate it in 2006. In 2003 those numbers were equal and were about 30%. In all those
years
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, under 5% of individuals never ate fast
food
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or they ate fast
food
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every day. In 2006, 20% of
people
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ate it several times a
week
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and for
people
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in 2003 and
2013
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,2013
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this
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number was about 15%. And for
people
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who ate a few times a year
this
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number was about 15%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, years, week with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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