The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
people
that ate fast
food
in restaurants in three different
years
, namely 2003, 2006, and 2013 in the USA.
Overall
, most
of
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the
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people
ate fast
food
at least once a
week
or once or twice a month.
However
, a small percentage of
people
who
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never ate fast
food
or ate it every day. These facts were true for all
years
2003, 2006, and 2013. As we can see, about 60% of
people
ate fast
food
once a
week
or once or twice a month in all three
years
. In 2006, 33% of
people
ate it once a
week
,
while
this
number in 2013 was under 30%. For individuals who ate fast
food
once or twice a
month
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we had the reverse pattern which means that more than one-third of
people
ate fast
food
in 2013,
while
just 25% of
people
ate it in 2006. In 2003 those numbers were equal and were about 30%. In all those
years
, under 5% of individuals never ate fast
food
or they ate fast
food
every day. In 2006, 20% of
people
ate it several times a
week
and for
people
in 2003 and
2013
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this
number was about 15%. And for
people
who ate a few times a year
this
number was about 15%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, years, week with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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