The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
people
that ate fast food
in restaurants in three different years
, namely 2003, 2006, and 2013 in the USA.
Overall
, most of
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apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
ate fast food
at least once a week
or once or twice a month. However
, a small percentage of people
who
never ate fast Correct pronoun usage
apply
food
or ate it every day. These facts were true for all years
2003, 2006, and 2013.
As we can see, about 60% of people
ate fast food
once a week
or once or twice a month in all three years
. In 2006, 33% of people
ate it once a week
, while
this
number in 2013 was under 30%. For individuals who ate fast food
once or twice a month
we had the reverse pattern which means that more than one-third of Add a comma
,month
people
ate fast food
in 2013, while
just 25% of people
ate it in 2006. In 2003 those numbers were equal and were about 30%.
In all those years
, under 5% of individuals never ate fast food
or they ate fast food
every day. In 2006, 20% of people
ate it several times a week
and for people
in 2003 and 2013
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,2013
this
number was about 15%. And for people
who ate a few times a year this
number was about 15%.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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